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So I retook "Marry Me" with the idea of putting the "Yes" in the slot holder instead of on the board. I took some with seven letters and some with just these three. The angle and lighting was the best for this picture, though I'm still not very satisfied with it. I started too late and it was already getting dark outside when I tried taking this picture (Yes, I was playing scrabble outside, by myself, in the dark. ) Anyway... I do like it all the same. The way I took it I was trying to blur either to the "Yes" or the "Will you marry me" and have the other clear. I liked this angle and focus the best.
EDIT: Hoping to do this for For 's Re-envision it! project.
When taking this picture I struggled between wanting to have a correct scrabble game (which would basically mean that I couldn't have a space and have the words "Will You" together) and wanting it to be easily read. This was the best solution that I came up with, though by all means I am open to suggestions.
Also, what about the angle? Is straight on really the most interesting way I could have taken that or is there a better way that I just happen to be missing? And if it IS best straight on, is it important that the picture be precisely centered?
Next, the letter holder. I like it being in the picture, although I also tried it a different way with this picture originally:
Is one way better than the other? Personally I found this one a bit more interesting because the focus was more dramatic, rather than the whole thing being in focus, but I dunno... With the letter holder I also felt like there should be seven letters but I wasn't sure how exactly to go about doing that. I could put nonesense letters around the "yes" but I tried that some and it seemed jumbled to me, less clear and less dramatic. Anyone think it would be better that way?
Lastly, would this picture be more dramatic with a traditional scrabble board (wooden pieces, muted colors, etc.) or is it better with the more vibrant, new looking pieces?
Thanks to anyone who takes the time to critique this!
~Secret
EDIT: Hoping to do this for For 's Re-envision it! project.
When taking this picture I struggled between wanting to have a correct scrabble game (which would basically mean that I couldn't have a space and have the words "Will You" together) and wanting it to be easily read. This was the best solution that I came up with, though by all means I am open to suggestions.
Also, what about the angle? Is straight on really the most interesting way I could have taken that or is there a better way that I just happen to be missing? And if it IS best straight on, is it important that the picture be precisely centered?
Next, the letter holder. I like it being in the picture, although I also tried it a different way with this picture originally:
Is one way better than the other? Personally I found this one a bit more interesting because the focus was more dramatic, rather than the whole thing being in focus, but I dunno... With the letter holder I also felt like there should be seven letters but I wasn't sure how exactly to go about doing that. I could put nonesense letters around the "yes" but I tried that some and it seemed jumbled to me, less clear and less dramatic. Anyone think it would be better that way?
Lastly, would this picture be more dramatic with a traditional scrabble board (wooden pieces, muted colors, etc.) or is it better with the more vibrant, new looking pieces?
Thanks to anyone who takes the time to critique this!
~Secret
Image size
3264x2448px 1.77 MB
Make
OLYMPUS IMAGING CORP.
Model
E-500
Shutter Speed
1/80 second
Aperture
F/4.0
Focal Length
35 mm
ISO Speed
100
Date Taken
Feb 11, 2009, 6:35:15 PM
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is an idea truly romantic and exciting. We are in time where no one would ever surprise by the ways in which marriage is requested. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/l/l…" width="26" height="17" alt="" title="Love"/>
It would be a great idea to doing
The "yes" is a fast, as the couple already had planned, or no one would doubt to say YES. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/n/n…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title="Nod"/>
It reminds me of the movies on las vegas. The life as a player plays with a beautiful woman he loves.
Innovative idea and lovely, men should not be afraid to do this things please! the women loves this things!!!!!!!!!!!
I love your idea! please keep your good imagination <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/h/h…" width="38" height="15" alt="" title="Hug"/>